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If I had to pick one thing to "improve" I'd perhaps say the guys arm wrapped around her lower body looks a little strange and his nose is very distracting and is almost like the main feature. But that's just being picky because really it's a good illustration and a wonderful piece of work.
Well done.
and sorry for taking so long to reply to this, i must have accidentally deleted it from my messages, because i'm just now seeing it
ahah yeah, i totally see what you mean with the art looking weird...it's kind of just coming from nowhere haha
and i think i kind of messed up with the lighting on his nose, which is probably why it stands out so much
thanks a bunch for the feedback!
No worries. Some times other stuff gets in the way heh.
You're most welcome and I hope it was some form of helpful to you.
i've been paying more attention to how arms move
and how different lighting hits faces
so yeah, pointing those things out gave me something to pay attention to
so thank you!
As prizes from me you get a journal feature, llama badge (if available) and a comment/crit on your work.
So for journal feature; [link]
As for llama badge; it has just been awarded.
The crit/comment I will award when I have more time... but I won't forget.
Congratulations.
that's no problem at all, take your time
like...
so much
xD